Tuesday, February 21, 2017

Remeber

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Tuesday 7th February

I remember…

Digging a hole at the beach.

The sand so hard to dig.
Little waves of slippery water coming into the hole.
The hole getting filled up with water.
I get sand all over my hot body.
I go jump in  the ice cold water to wash all the sand off.
I get out of the water my cousins are burying my brothers feet in the hole with sand.
That was summer.

Kingi
I was learning to notice and use the structure of an piece of writing